You might want to work on getting to the point quicker. I read your entire article three times now, and still don't know what you mean by "semi-retired." And I've done at least one mini-retirement myself.

Tim Ferriss talked about "mini-retirements." It was clear. I watched Godfather 1, and Don Corleone was "semi-retired." It was clear.

In this article, you have an intro talking about why semi-retirement evokes debate, then three sources of confusion generally comes up when thinking of the term, then primary flaws about traditional retirement, then how semi-retirement varies by person. Then chock words like choices, process, structuring our worlds, cost of living, cash allocation strategies, and then finally the importance of partnership.

You need to be able to make a clear, easily understandable point.

If you are going to define a term, you need to be able to sum it up in one powerful sentence.